高考英語今昔作文
高考英語今昔作文
下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編整理的高考英語今昔作文，以供大家學(xué)習(xí)參考。
在“今昔對比”的對比類寫作中，一定要把握時態(tài)的運用，時態(tài)通常是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。寫作格式：提出主題句——對過去情況的描述——對現(xiàn)在情況的描述——總結(jié)句。當(dāng)然，也可以對今、昔進行逐條對比。今昔對比類作文常用句型：
.Our (school/hometown), as all may know, is not what it used to be.
In the past, …… I wished that our (school/hometown) could be more brilliant,
there would be a ……. But now, everything has changed.
My wish comes true. Moreover, ……
In addition, what makes (the school/hometown) more lovely is that ……
If you were here, you would be amazed by the beauty of our (school/campus/hometown)
1. 開頭常用句型
(1) Great changes have taken place.
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.
(2) Things have begun to improve since…(自從…以來，事情有了好轉(zhuǎn)/改善)
Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.
2. 對比常用句型:
(1)…used to…, but now… 過去常……，但是現(xiàn)在……
(2) …in the past, but now… 在過去……，但是現(xiàn)在……
(3) once…, but now… 曾經(jīng)…….，但是現(xiàn)在……
(4) Things are different now. 情況已大不同了
(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是現(xiàn)在全變了
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練1
1.聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況：
1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。
2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。
3)教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費就讀。
注意：1)要點齊全，前后連貫。
2)詞數(shù)：100-120之間。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school!
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練2
假設(shè)你是李明， 你的美國朋友杰克聽說你校正在開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)，來信詢問有關(guān)情況，請你寫一封信，談一談開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)前后，你的學(xué)習(xí)情況的變化。
注意：1用書信格式。
2詞數(shù)：100左右
3 生詞：研究性學(xué)習(xí)exploring study ，上網(wǎng)surf the internet。
| 過去 | 現(xiàn)在 |
| 課堂 老師講解知識點，學(xué)生聽講，記筆記。 | 老師提出問題，學(xué)生互相討論或?qū)W生自己提出問題自己討論解決。 |
| 完成大量的作業(yè)。 | 豐富多彩的課外活動，如讀自己感興趣的書籍， 去圖書館或上網(wǎng)查資料。 |
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練3
假設(shè)你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負擔(dān)，來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。
周末活動(減負前) 周末活動(減負后)
白天：上課、做作業(yè) 白天：參觀博物館、學(xué)習(xí)電腦、繪畫
晚上：做作業(yè) 晚上：看新聞、讀書、看報
就寢時間：11：30 就寢時間：10：00
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右;
2、開頭已為你寫好。
生詞：減輕學(xué)習(xí)負擔(dān)---reduce learning load
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again._____________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練4
請根據(jù)下面六幅圖的提示和所提供的主題句，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Life” 的英文短文。詞數(shù) 100 左右。(2004年北京市春季高考寫作)
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練1
范文學(xué)生作品Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it.
?、?Thank you.
修改為Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school !
?、?This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.
It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③and has been developing very fast. People here ④ live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ andthe newly built teaching building⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here.
?、?What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here!
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練2
Dear Jack,
How nice to hear from you again.
Dear Jack,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on explaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves.After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.
In a word, we are now masters of study, and we are happy.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練3
一、評分原則
1、本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2、評分時，選根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。
3、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。
4、評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文連貫性及語言的得體性。
5、拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。
6、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。
二、內(nèi)容要點：
1、過去忙于一課、做作業(yè)
2、現(xiàn)在有時間讀課外書、參觀博物館等
3、現(xiàn)在有時間看新聞、讀報紙
4、不必再熬夜
三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求：
第五檔次(很好)：(21-25分)
完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
-覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。
-應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
-語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致其;具備較強的語言運用能力。
-有效地使用了語句音的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)(16-20分)
完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
-雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。
-應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
-語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。
-應(yīng)用簡單的語句音的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當(dāng))：(11-15)
基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
-雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但酸辣所有主要內(nèi)容。
-應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。
-有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
-應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。
整體而言，基本達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。
-語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，詞匯項目有限。
-有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
-較少使用語句的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。
信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
-明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
-語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。
-較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。
-缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。
信息未能傳達給讀都。
未能傳達給讀者任何信息;內(nèi)容太少、無法評判;寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。
四、說明：
1、內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達。 2、對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。
五、One possible version:
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
今昔對比類作文訓(xùn)練4
Changes In Our Life
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home. And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but nowwe watch the news and other programs on TV. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.
In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.