托福寫作完全沒有思路怎么辦啊
很多人在完成托福獨立寫作時沒有思路，導致托福寫作無話可說。下面小編給大家?guī)硗懈懽魉悸贩椒ā?/p>
托福寫作完全沒有思路怎么辦啊?
托福寫作需要整理思路和基本的方法!
經(jīng)過一段時間的備考，很多同學對于獨立寫作題目涉及的話題應該是比較熟悉了，在進行首段結(jié)構講解之前，希望大家思考這樣一個問題：獨立寫作中所涉及的這些話題，為什么會被ETS考官選中，放在一個全球性的語言考試中呢?大家可以再回顧一下獨立寫作的一些題目，他們其實都有一個共同的性質(zhì)，那就是它所涉及的話題和內(nèi)容，都是大家熟知的，并且會引起人們的討論的話題，也就是考生們“普遍知曉”，并能“引起討論”。因此我們得出托福獨立寫作題目的兩個特點：一是具有“普遍性”，二是具有“可討論性”。
所謂“普遍性”，就是題目涉及的內(nèi)容大家都熟知，例如，曾經(jīng)有這樣一個題目：A/D：The telephone has greater effects on people than television.題目當中的television 和telephone都是大家熟知的事物，起碼對于所有托?？忌鷣碚f，大家都肯定是再熟悉不過的東西了，所以這樣的事物出現(xiàn)在題目中，是具有公平性的;
所謂“可討論性”，就是指題目所涉及的話題有可討論的價值，如同辯論賽的論題一樣，它是可以讓正反雙方展開討論的，他的觀點是辯證的。
根據(jù)這兩個特點，我們總結(jié)了一種開頭段的結(jié)構，這個結(jié)構有三部分組成：第一部分——體現(xiàn)普遍性;第二部分——體現(xiàn)可討論性;第三部分——得出立場或者文章打算;這里的第三部分根據(jù)大家文章行文思路的不同而進行不同的段落收尾就可以了，下面我們根據(jù)這個結(jié)構理論來進行一個題目的講解：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country，a government should spend more money on young children’s education(5-10) rather than on universities.
同意/不同意：為了一個國家的發(fā)展，政府應當花更多的錢在兒童教育上，而不是大學教育上。
這是一個教育類的話題，同時涉及到政府撥款的問題，涵蓋兩個方面的比較，一個是投資兒童教育，一個是投資大學教育。大家試著將這兩個方面總結(jié)成一個事件
——the issue of how to invest in education
或者——the issue of educational investment
做完這項工作之后就可以按照三部分的結(jié)構寫出開頭段了。
首先要寫的是普遍性：
As is often the case, the issue of educational investment is so much concerned that it has aroused a wide discussion.
此句中開頭是以as引導的非限制性定語從句，as指代的是逗號后面句子中的全部內(nèi)容，這件事是經(jīng)常發(fā)生的情形。此句體現(xiàn)了問題的普遍性。然后就要體現(xiàn)可討論性了，如何來體現(xiàn)呢，首先，出現(xiàn)可討論性的前提，就是因為出現(xiàn)了差異，我們可以適當?shù)倪^度交代一下原因，可如下敘述：
People varying in personalities as well as backgrounds tend to look at the same matter from diversified perspectives.
這句話的意思是，因為人們個性和背景方面各不相同，所以人們往往從不同的角度看待同一個問題。過度之后，進行“可討論性“的寫作：
Some people maintain that investing in primary education is a wise/an optimum option, while others hold that investing in tertiary-level education is sensible/sagacious.
將兩部分人的觀點進行論述，目的在于通過可討論性的體現(xiàn)，將題目轉(zhuǎn)化成雙方面的觀點。之后要做的工作就是段落收尾了，收尾之前也需要進行適當?shù)匿亯|In taking various factors into consideration, 其中take…into consideration代表“考慮”之意，相當于consider something，之后，根據(jù)行文方式的不同選擇不同的收尾方式，下面給大家兩中選擇：
——I reckon that elementary education and high-level education are intertwined elements that are playing respective roles in the process of one’s growth.
這種收尾方式偏向中庸之道，后面的行文也多傾向于分情況討論的思路;
——I reckon that it is the latter/former claim that makes more sense/ bears more rationality.
這種收尾方式思路方向比較確定，一般選擇立論文的考生會選擇。
托福獨立寫作范文：媒體過分關注名人的私生活
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Santa told a famous man in front of a flashing, well decorated chritmas tree,"You could make three wishes, and just only three best wishes for the coming new year." Would you be eager to know what are the three wishes? Then, he wished :"firstly,may God send me my own calm and tranguil personal life without any interevenation; Secondly,I want to keep myself and my family away from spotlights and all the media focuses as far as possible. Last but not least,all what I have wished is the very secret between God and me.
To think a well known man standing high above the masses, to our surprise,was making such a hard and transparent living.It is certain that everyone has their curiosity,and in their image- nation famous people are so perfect that there should be no flaw in their lifetime.But how could that be? As an old saying goes, "No man is infallible."In my opinion,therefore,media has negative effects on their personal life.
I feel that this phenomenon suggests that those who are interested in famous people's personal life are, in fact, jealous of their achivements. Almost every successful figure has experienced failure, rubs and what they have owned today proves that their efforts are paid off.A winner has a zest for life, work,play,food ,other people and the world of nature ,also enjoyshis own accomplishments without guilty.Why do they soar when others sink? It depends on your own effort and deligence.
A celebrated public figure has ever said," Winners have different potentials. Achievement is not the most important thing. Authenticity is.The authentic person experiences the reality of himself by known- ing himself, being himself and becoming a credible,responsive person. Indeed television,magazines and other media needn't pay so much atten- tion to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebraties.
Please never rehearse another tradegy of Diana ,a beloved British princess who now may enjoy her calm life in the paradise .What most deeply impressed me in Diana's eulogy is------ How great she suffering is ,we cannot even imagine...
托福獨立寫作范文：人類與地球
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays our Earth faces a number of serious problems, such as the environment pollution, the increasing population, the fatal effects of nuclear weapons, and so on. So some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. But as far as I am concerned that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live and also makes some negative effects in this process. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
Even though we face so many crisis, no one can deny that Earth are more suitable for human habitation. That is the result of the efforts of generations of people. If without that, we might also live in caves and eat the crude food just like wild animals. If that is true, we must haven’t time and energy to think over the problems of the Earth because we have to look for food and avoid becoming the food of other animals. At that state, whether the Earth were harmed is not important for human because some certain crisises can annihilate the total population, such as some infectious disease or the a change of climates.
It is inevitable to produce some positive aspect functions when human are struggle to improve the survive abilities and from the experiences of history we also have make great effort to resolve this kinds of problems. For example, most of people hope to limit the scope of nuclear weapons and the protection of environment is accept by almost every one. Most of problems are controlled by ourselves and some of them have the hope to be resolved in years. We are finding the balance between the development and the protection of our Earth. So it is unnecessary to deny the advancement of human.
For the reasons presented above, we admit that there are some problems in the process of the human development, but those problems are resolving and as a whole we make the Earth a better place to live. Human evolved in the mode of continuing to correct their mistakes and making a better progress.
托福獨立寫作范文：你的社區(qū)建立新的高中
It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
I oppose having a new high school built in my neighborhood. Although I know there's a real need for a new facility, I have to say that I don't want one built so close to me. I think it would cause a lot of problems.
First of all, there are very few teenagers in this neighborhood, or in our suburban subdivision, for that matter. Most of the residents here are either retired or are just starting out with young children. This means that the kids coming to the new high school wouldn't be walking. They would come on buses or would be driving to the school. Either way, this would mean a lot more traffic on our streets.
In addition to the traffic on school days, there also would be traffic whenever there was a sporting event, such as a basketball or football game, or activities at the school. Would there be enough parking in the school lot for everyone attending those events? Probably not. Consequently, those extra cars would end up in our neighborhood.
My neighbors and I would also be upset about the loss of the park, which is the site that's been selected for the high school. Mothers with young children gather there every morning for their kids to play together. People my age like to take a walk after dinner. On weekends, that park is a place for picnics and relaxation. We'd be sorry to lose our neighborhood park.
I also have some concerns about all those young people being in our neighborhood. Would there be problems with drugs or fights? Could the school district guarantee us that security would be apriority? These are concerns that I don't think can be addressed sufficiently for me to support a new high school in my neighborhood.
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