托福寫作范文解析舉例子手法
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托福寫作范文解析舉例子手法
Question 1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sample Response
閱讀提示：藍(lán)色部分不是例子，呈現(xiàn)出來是為了給大家的閱讀創(chuàng)建完整的語境。文中玫紅色的部分是舉例子的部分。另外，文章沒有完整呈現(xiàn)。
To many people, having fame or wealth is the highest ideal. However, we deal with setbacks and mediocrity most of the time. In this case, optimism is desired, and, in fact, it is more important than attaining success.
An open mind in the face of failure enables individuals to have the gut to give it another shot, and as long as we try, the likelihood of success remains. Conversely, if they surrender to the defeat, they are hardly likely to achieve anything. This happens to me on a daily basis. As a salesperson, anytrade may not be made by the first meeting with my clients. Anegotiation may take forever, and failure is highly likely. However, I maintain my faith, and as a result, I persist all the time and have made good deals. Gradually, I find it more delightful to have resilience and patience than to achieve success, which brings only transient excitement. The opposite case happened to one peer of mine who recently quit the job. As he could notcope with the constant failure properly, he never made a single successful sale.
「后文略」
Question 2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some believe that we should keep a distance from the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of each other. Others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationship with them and we should spend more time with them.
Which do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sample Response
閱讀提示：藍(lán)色部分不是例子，呈現(xiàn)出來是為了給大家的閱讀創(chuàng)建完整的語境。文中玫紅色的部分是舉例子的部分。另外，文章沒有完整呈現(xiàn)。
Between two individuals, keeping a distance could go either of the two following ways: the either strengthen or weaken the relationship. It is reasonable that some people prefer the intimacy between loved ones; in my case, a certain distance is necessary, however.
Staying close with each other, the two parties of a relationship—a friendship, a romantic relationship, or family—may have no secrets between each other. This may be the expectation of a good relationship of my opposite side. The opposite side may also expect that friends, lovers or family stick with each other and be the 24/7 company. They would otherwise feel insecure or even deny the relationship. However, the closeness may be stressful and annoying,counterproductiveto building a sound relationship. For example, my parents and I used to live in the same neighborhood. As they were physically close to me, they visited me often or my apartment when I was absent. Although I appreciated their doing household chores for me, I also felt uncomfortable because many of their unscheduled visits were intrusions and those regular visits were also not-so-delightful. As an adult, I would prefer privacy and random solitude to being taken detailed care of. It thus follows that we in fact would not appreciate an around-the-clock companion but prefer having no distractions.
It thus follows that keeping a distance is actually favorable to the mutual cherishment between two people. When the distance is kept, nothing is taken-for-granted, and the feeling of thathighlights the value of a friend, a lover, or family. Behind the feeling is the sense of insecurity, which however makes the friend, lover or family treasure.This is my strategy of maintaining a good status in my friendships. I deliberately keep myself available yet from a proper distance to my friends, and they thus have limited yet adequate access to me. Many of them may have the fear that they may lose me and, as a result, always keep me in mind.
「后文略」
遇到意義抽象的話題時(shí)，我們的講道理可能是蒼白無力的，我們甚至可能也無法把一個(gè)道理講出所以然?！皶?huì)舉例子”才是成就寫作內(nèi)容充實(shí)、道理真切的關(guān)鍵，且不說例子的內(nèi)容在篇幅上的幫助。
托福寫作如何找思路
列舉雙觀點(diǎn)撐起文章結(jié)構(gòu)
托福寫作的基本原則就是一定要找好寫的方向，而不是另辟蹊徑、試圖做到一鳴驚人。因?yàn)橥懈懽骺疾斓氖钦Z言的應(yīng)用能力，而不是學(xué)生的思想高度。另外，如果看到一個(gè)題目，覺得某一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)好寫，但是只能想到一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，那么就趕緊從另外一個(gè)角度展開，看能否想到兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。終極目標(biāo)就是選擇的角度能夠拓展出兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，撐起兩個(gè)主體段。
列好提綱再開始填充內(nèi)容
選對(duì)破題思路非常的重要，因?yàn)橹挥幸婚_始方向?qū)α?，才能往下越走越順，否則寫到最后會(huì)步履維艱。因此，在拿到題目后，不妨花個(gè)2~3分鐘時(shí)間，構(gòu)思下自己的思路，再下筆也不遲?？偤眠^寫到一半，發(fā)現(xiàn)后面寫不下去了，進(jìn)退兩難，最后硬著頭皮編下去，因?yàn)檫@樣的文章很容易跑偏，而且很難將字?jǐn)?shù)寫上去。
一面倒寫法也需要反轉(zhuǎn)
除了雙觀點(diǎn)寫法以外，現(xiàn)在一面倒的寫法也是比較流行的，那就是自從一個(gè)角度把觀點(diǎn)一路拓展寫下去的方法，否定就否定到底，支持就支持到最后。這樣的寫法從寫作思路上來說是比較簡(jiǎn)單的，但大家破題以后還需要注意留一個(gè)反轉(zhuǎn)的余地，那就是適當(dāng)認(rèn)可一下自己反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)存在的正確性，簡(jiǎn)單來說就是雖然某某觀點(diǎn)有很多問題但還是有一點(diǎn)可取之處的。用這種方式來做一個(gè)小的反轉(zhuǎn)，能讓你的論述更具有客觀性和包容性。
【托福獨(dú)立寫作】 高分技巧之讓步式寫法用法介紹
讓步段，顧名思義，就是退了一步的段落。例如，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 選擇了同意的立場(chǎng)，寫完了三個(gè)同意的理由之后，可以再寫一點(diǎn)讓步段論述一下反方的觀點(diǎn)，即在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)好也很重要。寫讓步段的好處有很多，一是上文提及的最實(shí)際的用途---湊字?jǐn)?shù)，二是從行文邏輯看，寫一段讓步段也可以展現(xiàn)考生思維的嚴(yán)密性。只要時(shí)間允許，此種一舉多得的做法為何不嘗試呢?
托福獨(dú)立寫作讓步段寫法講解
但是，讓步段寫作也需要遵循一定的原則?？忌趯懽鲿r(shí)，應(yīng)當(dāng)按照三部曲進(jìn)行：1)寫出一個(gè)反方觀點(diǎn) 2)進(jìn)行一定程度的削弱 3)重申自己的觀點(diǎn)。
1. 寫出反方觀點(diǎn)
這一步大多數(shù)同學(xué)都做得不錯(cuò)，但是在提出反方觀點(diǎn)之前，可再加上一些連接詞，例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。還拿之前拿到題目做例子，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 總觀點(diǎn)是同意，讓步段寫學(xué)習(xí)好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，應(yīng)寫：Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.
2. 進(jìn)行一定程度的削弱
這是大多數(shù)同學(xué)會(huì)忽略的一步。很多同學(xué)在寫讓步段的時(shí)候，喜歡跳過第二步，直接重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，然而這樣的寫法會(huì)顯得邏輯上牽強(qiáng)，行文也顯得生硬。因此，在提出反方觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要進(jìn)行一定的削弱。例如在寫完上文那句話之后，應(yīng)加上：However, the outstanding scores only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.
3. 重申自己的觀點(diǎn)
這一步非常重要，因?yàn)樽尣蕉蔚奶岢鰞H僅是小插曲，重要的還是自己的觀點(diǎn)。切不可寫了讓步段，就忘了自己的立場(chǎng)，那樣就是得不償失了。因此，在寫完上面兩句話之后，需要再加上一句，therefore, I still hold the opinion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.
在讓步段的寫作當(dāng)中，尤其需要注意兩點(diǎn)：1是第二步的削弱過程，這樣可使文章看起來不那么唐突，更為流暢。2是另外還需注意字?jǐn)?shù)的控制，讓步段切不可寫得超過之前的論述段的長(zhǎng)度，否則就有觀點(diǎn)不明確的嫌疑了。
托福寫作范文：教育與學(xué)習(xí)
Students aged 13-18 are taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long. Some people suggest it would benefit younger students to be taught by different teachers. Do you agree with this view? Why or why not? (2017年7月15日托福獨(dú)立寫作真題)
Introduction
As far as I am concerned, the method proposed by some people that students aged under 12 should be taught by different teachers offers a better solution to these children’s education. [開頭段直接表立場(chǎng)，言簡(jiǎn)意賅]
Body paragraph 1
[中心句，開門見山]→There is one major insidious[形容詞，潛在的]problem with the traditional method – one teacher in charge of all the subjects.[含蓄虛擬，假設(shè)隱含在主語]→Being taught by only one teacher would initiate[及物動(dòng)詞，發(fā)起]boredom in children, [非限定語從句]→who are more boredom-prone[形容詞，易感到無聊的] than others. From 6 to 12 years old, as children continue to grow, they are becoming increasingly interested in coming into contact with others. Different classmates of the same or opposite gender are perfect targets for these young students to mix or play with; their teacher, [同位語從句]→an adult they see throughout each school day, also ought to be someone of a novelty. [假設(shè)論證]→If all the subjects are taught by only one teacher, dislike or even aversion[可數(shù)名詞，厭惡的人或東西] towards him or her would gradually arise in some students. A small proportion would simply dislike this teacher’s physical appearance while others may likely have an emotional aversion to the teacher’s teaching style.
Body paragraph 2
To address the aforementioned problem,←[不定式作目的狀語從句] hiring new teachers to bring freshness to these kids would be an effective solution. ←[就上段的問題提出解決方案，中心句] 【內(nèi)容詳見真經(jīng)6】
Conclusion
As is stated above, being taught by only one teacher has a serious weakness, and this problem can be addressed by letting different teachers take charge of different subjects. ←[并列句，重申觀點(diǎn)] Apparently, these teachers can provide different specialized [及物或不及物動(dòng)詞，使專門化]training for different subjects, thereby laying a solid foundation for the primary education. [總結(jié)上文論點(diǎn)收尾]
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